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As I slip you my cigarette,
The smoke entwines around us,
Staining our health,
Forgiving is the graves,
Sending us to burrow with the dawn,
The chimes sing in the glade,
As our last song rings.

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I made this for a contest :) smoking is bad.

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~Sigma-Echo-Seven Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
A highly interesting cadence here.
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:iconlerdavian:
That pic makes me want to smoke. :O
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~hippyJess Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hmmm :/
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:iconlerdavian:
It's not good either way XD
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~hippyJess Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol
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:iconlerdavian:
I don't really like cigarettes though.
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~Lyndonhector Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
wow thats good
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~hippyJess Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Really? :) Thank you!
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~Lyndonhector Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yes really short and nice :)
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~SirSlenderman Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Cigarettes are bad, yeah. But smoking in general isn't bad unless you're inhaling the wrong stuff.
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