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Love?
What is love?
Is love the way he smiles at you from afar?
Is love the way you shyly look away?
No, love is more special.

Is love the feeling you get when your eyes meet?
When you get butterfly's in you stomach that wont go away?
No, love is more intimate.
Love is when you can't go a day without seeing or talking
To that other person.
Love is When your heart aches whenever that person is hurt
               
Love isn't something you can find in a cereal box,
Or pick up off the street.
Love is deeper than that.
Love is a connection like no other.
                                
So what is love?                         
Love. What is it?
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megamiaki364 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*sings*What is love? Baby don't hurt me...Don't hurt me...No more!
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hippyJess Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol!
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yaoi-maniac-freak Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful! :heart:
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hippyJess Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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yaoi-maniac-freak Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Youre welcome! :D
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ErosMyth Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012
:D Your verse is so full of meaning, and each question has so many facets to each answer. I like that very much. Thais for the great thoughts. :rose:
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hippyJess Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you liked it!
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ClaireM2 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
I know right? GIMME AMERICA! >:O
...Nice poem btw, author-tan
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hollyfowl56 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
this is really good
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hippyJess Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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hollyfowl56 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
welcmome
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mynever85 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
I like your honesty and the way you confront the popular concept of "love". I also appreciate the simplistic manner in which you explain what love is not, something we all will painfully come to realize sooner or later.
As for your question, what is love?..."Love is perfect, and we are not".
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hippyJess Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you?
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mynever85 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011
I like your art.
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hippyJess Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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JuliusScipio Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2011  Student Writer
I'm glad for this poem. Love isn't a glance, and it isn't that flirtatious grin. I'm glad you can look a little deeper here. :)

Reminds me of.... "No greater love have any man, that he would lay his life down for his brothers." Sorry, can't help it! Haha.
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hippyJess Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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OpenCagePoetry Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
If only love was easy to find and explain. I remember feeling what's described in the second stanza...Still do every now and then....
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hippyJess Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
So do i :)
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Internet-Cancer Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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"What is Love"
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hippyJess Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
lol
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Internet-Cancer Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Heh, I saw this and I couldn't resist.
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jessicavanhelsing Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
So true!
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hippyJess Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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Heir-of-Phoenixa Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful, that's what love is.
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hippyJess Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!! :D :bow:
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Heir-of-Phoenixa Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:clap:
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